by CaptainBritton on 4/8/2012 @ 9:18am
|Yes! It looks good in panel 1. (Keep going! - When you put one shadow in, make sure they are all in, otherwise we wonder where they went.).|
Kaeley's reaction in panel 3 is great.
I also like the half-intangible ghost hand! (Grey works as a background color, I think I like p3 better than p1 and p2...I also like the way the blue from downstairs plays with the orange floor. Try using some subtle/greyed down tones rather than electric colors, maybe? I think it'll make your main characters pop forward, and put the less-important backgrounds back where they belong. Overall, though it's one of the best PP's yet!
Good work! More shading, yes!!! Know your light source and you are on your way! :)
by InvaderPet on 4/8/2012 @ 7:40pm
|Thank you so much!|
You what's annoying me though. The one two comics back I saved as a .png, I upload it, and it's not blurry. This one and the previous one were saved as .png as well and they STILL uploaded blurry! AUGH!
by InvaderPet on 4/9/2012 @ 10:34am
|I meant, "You KNOW what's annoying me, though", not "You what's annoying me, though." Sorry!|
by L.S.Erhardt on 4/9/2012 @ 5:24pm
|I notice that too. All my png files at uploaded at 350dpi and sometimes it turns out blurry.|
Don't know why. Kevin?
by NineInchNachos on 4/10/2012 @ 12:55am
|excellent feedback Captain!|
by Non Sequitur on 4/10/2012 @ 11:59am
"Ownership" of living beings, particularly apparently sentient ones is not a good message to the children.
by InvaderPet on 4/10/2012 @ 7:17pm
|I thought someone would say it's out of character for Kaeley to refer to Notle as "owner", seeing as it's established Kaeley and Spike don't respect her much.|