American Woman


issue #2, Page 5.

"You Played Dirty"
posted Jul 19, 2012
American Woman - issue #2, Page 5. (issue #2)
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by NineInchNachos on 7/19/2012 @ 8:30am
magical pony tail!


by InvaderPet on 7/19/2012 @ 9:30am


How do you know?

by CaptainBritton on 7/19/2012 @ 9:50am
Nothing magical here, just scrunchies.




by The Jinxmedic on 7/19/2012 @ 10:03am
Sulky lips.

by The Jinxmedic on 7/19/2012 @ 10:03am
Sulky lips.

by NineInchNachos on 7/19/2012 @ 10:06am
dirty plays get the goods


by Non Sequitur on 7/19/2012 @ 11:21am
This is wonderful.
Keep it up!



by NineInchNachos on 7/19/2012 @ 12:26pm
more hands! 

you got the lady hands down.

I'd exaggerate the coaches hands more... maybe Jack Kerby Thing hands.

the head construction in panel 1 of our at-risk-youth hero looks a little squashed/droopy.  lift/recess those eye sockets!

panel 2+3... why is she reminding me of chalkie Andrea?



by CaptainBritton on 7/19/2012 @ 12:43pm
You are a fun commenter. I appreciate all of the hard work you put in ;).

Hands are tough, and I am aware of the personality one can put into hands. So on to your points!

1) Poor Coach has "Catchers hands"...Google Johnny Bench, Carlton Fisk. The tools of ignorance and all that, right?

2) Sometimes squished heads come from wavy memory other times from a looseness I afford. In this case I drew this sketch of her way back, and I loved the energy that sketch had. Maybe this was a bit too sketchy for your liking. I'll file that. ;)

3) I have no idea. What does that say about you?

4) Do your comic! And ink it!!!



by NineInchNachos on 7/19/2012 @ 1:07pm
:)


by fredo on 7/19/2012 @ 2:16pm


Well, maybe the hands aren't right and maybe the head construction is questionable, but there's no doubt britton that you've got her breasts drawn perfectly.

by NineInchNachos on 7/19/2012 @ 2:30pm
peachy keen!